Thursday, April 24, 2008

Review Letter from classmate

Dear Cameron,

I thought that this was a very interesting paper. Before I read it I would have not believe you if you told me UCLA had the best basketball program in history. Now I can see that someone could present a strong case that UCLA does have the best basketball program. I really liked how you used stats to make a nonbeliever into a believer. Although I did notice just a few areas where you cited wrong and a few misspelled words, but I did not notice anything else wrong. I do agree with you and now believe that UCLA has the best basketball program in history.

Sincerely,
Ross Phillips

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