Peer Review Letter

Dear Cameron,

I would first like to tell you that your paper was really interesting. I did not know that white racism occurred as much as it does. I liked your thesis and how the paper was written. It had a lot of helpful points and your paper helped me on writing my paper better. The only thing I noticed about your wikipedia paper was that your conclusion should be a little longer and maybe more then just two or three sentences. I found your paper to be very interesting and helpful. i liked how you had your paper written; for example, you had your introduction, boby, body, and conclusion. In the body paragraphs, I liked how you compared white racism, and then in the next body paragraph you talked about African American racism. you started each paragraph with good transition words like, "First of All, Secondly, and In Conclusion." The paper was long enough and got all of your points in. I did notice some comma errors that you might want to check. Other then the comma errors, and the length in conclusion I thought your paper was well written and was very helpful.

Sincerely,
Ross